Pressure and Argument

K-Pop

Course 1 · Chapter 9 · Pressure and Argument

This is the hardest chapter of the course, and it is written with care. It covers the pressures on K-pop artists that the sources describe, the public arguments that followed, and the law on military service. It reports what the sources say, with owners, and it does not guess at the reasons behind any individual's life or death.

A note before you read This chapter mentions deaths by suicide, as the source articles do. It gives no details of how anyone died, and it does not speculate. If you or someone you know is struggling, please contact a local crisis line or a doctor. In the United Kingdom, Samaritans can be reached free on 116 123; elsewhere, a search for "suicide crisis line" plus your country will find one.
How this chapter was checked The facts here come from Wikipedia's K-pop article (Working conditions, Control over public image, Sexualization, Mental health sections), its Korean idol and BTS articles, and its article on Conscription in South Korea, as I read them. I read no court documents, news reports, medical sources or interviews. The articles name individuals only where they are public figures whose deaths or statements they report, and I add nothing beyond them.

Contracts and Trainees: The Law Responds

Chapter 4 followed the 2009 lawsuit to the Fair Trade Commission's contract templates and the 2014 law protecting performers under 19. The K-pop article describes a further step.

  • 2017 rules for trainees. On 7 March 2017 the Korea Fair Trade Commission "passed new regulations in order to protect trainee idols from unfair terms and working conditions". The article says that before them, trainees at eight agencies "were not permitted to seek contracts at any other agency while at training" and agencies "were able to terminate a trainee contract at any time for any reason". The Ministry of Culture applied the rules to all existing agencies through 2018.
  • The agencies' concerns. The article records the industry's worry that a trainee might train undercover at another agency, and its argument that each trainee, who trains for three years on average, is "a very large investment".
  • A testimony. The article reports that in September 2024 a member of NewJeans, Hanni, testified to Korean lawmakers about "workplace harassment and mistreatment during her time at Hybe", describing being ignored by managers and senior idols, and said she hoped younger trainees would not suffer the same. This is her testimony as reported. I read no response from the company, and I make no finding.

Mental Health

The K-pop article says some artists have suggested that "the uncertainty and pressures of their jobs as entertainers may be detrimental to their mental health". It gives two artists' own words:

SpeakerWhat the article quotes
Park Kyung (Block B)"There are many people who debuted with no sense of self yet, and they come to realize later that every move and every word they say is being observed so they become cautious and lose their freedom."
Suga (BTS), in an interview with Yonhap News"Anxiety and loneliness seem to be with me for life...Emotions are so different in every situation and every moment, so I think to agonise every moment is what life is."

These are two people speaking about their own experience. They do not describe every artist.

Deaths and Public Debate

The article says "the suicides of prominent K-pop musicians have drawn attention to both industry and societal pressures". It names the following, and I repeat only what it says.

YearWhat the article says
1996The singer Charles Park, also known as Seo Ji-won, died at the age of 19, before the release of his second album.
2017Kim Jong-hyun, who "had previously been open about his history of depression", died in December at the age of 27. In the spring of 2018 "a number of prominent Korean musicians participated in a free concert series to raise awareness of suicide prevention."
2019Sulli of f(x) died, followed one month later by her close friend Goo Hara. The article says both "were subjected to cyberbullying, which added to calls for reform".
2023The death of Moonbin "renewed scrutiny on the highly competitive world of Korean show business and the pressures its performers face."
What the sources do and do not say The article presents these deaths as having "drawn attention" to pressures and as prompting calls for reform. It does not say that any one factor caused any one death, and neither do I. The article offers "one reason" for the pressure (that K-pop amplifies a demand for perfection already intense in Korean society) and a case of online abuse after Sulli's relationship became public, where idols are "expected not to be in a relationship for years". These are explanations the article gives, not findings. A jewellery designer who works with K-pop stars is quoted as saying threats and angry mail are "normal for many idols", which is one person's account. Anyone writing about a death should stay with what sources report and avoid guessing about private lives.

Military Service

The conscription article says that since 1957 South Korea "has required male citizens between the ages of 18 and 35 to perform compulsory military service", and that the Military Service Act allows few exceptions: "no special case concerning mandatory military service shall be prescribed" except as the Act provides. The Korean idol article notes that the Constitution makes service mandatory for all men and "no exceptions are made" for idols, and that a former K-pop star, Yoo Seung-jun, "attempted to evade military service by obtaining American citizenship" and was banned from entering South Korea.

  • The 2020 amendment. The conscription article says a law passed in December 2020 allows "a two-year extension for notable K-pop artists", raising the enlistment age from 28 to 30. It adds that "some resources and media outlets claim" the main reason was Jin of BTS, who was about to turn 28. That is a claim about motive, with its owner given as unnamed outlets, and I do not rely on it.
  • Exemptions elsewhere. Exemptions are granted to some sports medallists and to classical musicians and ballet performers who win first place in stipulated international competitions. K-pop artists are not on that list. The article says 220 exemptions were granted from 2008 to 2018 (the figure is the article's).
  • BTS. In October 2022 their label announced Jin had withdrawn his deferral request and would enlist first. The BTS article says the group announced a pause on 14 June 2022 and that all members "completed their service by June 2025".
  • The money argument. The BTS article says that, according to an estimate, if members completed service Hybe would lose nearly US$10 billion over ten years, with nearly US$39 billion to the South Korean economy. It gives these as an estimate with no method, and the article also says Hybe's stock fell below its IPO price amid speculation.

Other Arguments

  • Appearance and sexualisation. Chapter 5 recorded the K-pop article's account of criticism of sexualisation, the 2014 law for under-19s and the 2019 "lookism" guidelines. The Korean idol article adds that some performers have been harassed for not fitting expectations, and names one example, and says LGBT artists "still face significant discrimination and prejudice", citing the singer Holland, who debuted in 2018 as a gay man.
  • Cultural appropriation. The K-pop article says groups have been "regularly accused" of appropriating African-American culture through styling such as cornrows and bandanas, and that "some have used blackface and racial slurs as part of their performances". It also records the view of Crystal S. Anderson that borrowing elements "does not automatically constitute negative cultural appropriation". This is an open argument.
  • Plagiarism. The article says some groups "have been accused of plagiarizing Western music acts". It names no case and gives no finding.
  • Earnings. The Korean idol article says the National Tax Service reported the average annual earnings for a Korean idol in 2013 at KR₩46.74 million (about US$42,000), up from KR₩26.97 million in 2010, and that "not much has changed for all but the most successful handful". That is the article's figure, and an average hides wide differences.

What Changed, What Is Disputed

Changed (per the articles)Disputed or unclear
Standard contract templates (after 2009); protections for performers under 19 (2014); rules for trainees (2017); extended enlistment age for notable K-pop artists (2020)How far the rules are followed; what they cost agencies; whether 2020's amendment was made for BTS
Open discussion by artists of mental health; concerts for suicide-prevention awareness (2018)Why individual people died; how much the industry, the culture or online abuse each contributed
Greater artist autonomy in the 2020s (K-pop article, Chapter 1)Whether that autonomy is real or small; testimony such as Hanni's is reported without a finding

Exercises

Exercise 1

Describe the 2017 trainee regulations and what the K-pop article says trainees could not do before them. Then give the industry's concern about the rules, and say why a testimony reported without a company response should not be treated as a finding.

Exercise 2

Explain what the K-pop article says the deaths of prominent musicians "drew attention to", and what it says about cyberbullying. Then explain, in your own words, why this chapter does not say what caused any individual death, and what a careful writer should do instead.

Exercise 3

Summarise the military service rules and the December 2020 amendment, including which claim about its purpose is attributed to unnamed outlets. Then give one other argument from this chapter and say whether the article treats it as settled.

Quick Reference

  • Trainee rules: Fair Trade Commission, 7 March 2017; before them, no seeking other contracts and termination at any time; applied to all agencies through 2018
  • Artists' words: Park Kyung and Suga on pressure and mental health
  • Deaths named by the article: 1996, 2017, 2019 (two, a month apart), 2023; "drew attention to" pressures; no single cause stated
  • Cyberbullying: cited as adding to calls for reform
  • Military service: men 18 to 35 since 1957; December 2020 amendment lets notable K-pop artists defer to 30; BTS members completed service by June 2025
  • Other disputes: sexualisation, cultural appropriation, plagiarism accusations, average earnings
  • Care: report with owners; do not speculate about private lives or causes

Next chapter: Capstone: A Pop Industry Argues With Itself, which draws the threads of the course together and gives a checklist for reading any claim about K-pop.