kpop1-9, Exercise 2: Deaths and care in writing

Model answer:

The article says the suicides of prominent K-pop musicians "have drawn attention to both industry and societal pressures". It says Sulli and Goo Hara "were subjected to cyberbullying, which added to calls for reform", and that Moonbin's death in 2023 renewed scrutiny of the competitive world of Korean show business.

The chapter does not say what caused any individual death because the sources do not establish one: they say attention was drawn to pressures, not that one factor caused one death, and a private person's reasons cannot be known from an encyclopedia article.
A careful writer should report only what sources say, with owners; avoid details of method; avoid guessing about private lives; point readers to support (a crisis line); and treat explanations such as "pressure to be perfect" as explanations offered, not findings.

Source: Wikipedia, K-pop (Mental health and suicides).